[Yet to Be Determined Title]
by Angeline Pastrana
written for Michael Bruno, Alexander Noyes, Jason Rosen, and Andrew Lee
also known as Honor Society
Everything is going wrong
Millions of thoughts in my mind
Nothing's going right today
A peaceful moment so hard to find
Until I reach for my iPod
Set my playlist of your songs
Turn it up loud
And just listen all night long
Your music soothes my soul
Your lyrics work like magic
You gents are my secret cure
When things seem so tragic
You get me through the hardest part
Your voice is like an angel's
Singing to my heart
It may seem silly
That a band could mean so much
But your music is more than special
It's my soul you've touched
I will always be a fan
Of your music, and of you
Forever until eternity
I'll be here, loyal and true
Your music soothes my soul
Your lyrics work like magic
You gents are my secret cure
When things seem so tragic
You get me through the hardest part
Your voice is like an angel's
Singing to my heart
When dealing with hardships never faced
You, my loves, are my saving grace
I turn my heart and soul to you
Slightly pathetic, but totally true
Your music soothes my soul
Your lyrics work like magic
You gents are my secret cure
When things seem so tragic
You get me through the hardest part
Your voice is like an angel's
Singing to my heart
And you may never know me
But I write this song for you.
So yeah, I kinda did some major editing on it. I don't know why. Oh, and Grace, I still can't believe it, but my friend may be able to actually hand this poem song to the gents!!! This is why I'm being so critical. So be honest. This needs to be perfect.
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OKAY. Firstly, I am so sorry it has taken so long to reply, but my internet hasn't been working until... now haha.
ReplyDeleteI really like it! I thought the title was 'To be Determined'... Now that I know it's not, hah, I just have to say that I kind of like that as a title. Like... my life is to be determined, but you boys always pull through.
Maybe:
Til I grab the MP3
Set my playlist to your songs
Turn it up loud
And listen all night long
And what if you changed this line to add in 'always': When things [always] seem so tragic
Those are just suggestions... I really like it! And how AWESOME would it be if they could read it? <3